Derring-do update

[pozorvlak]

There haven't been any updates on the Forties play for far too long. I have been working on it, but various computer problems have prevented me uploading any more recent drafts. Anyway, here's what I've got so far. It's about twice as long as the last posted draft, has more characters, and incorporates some of your excellent suggestions.

Script here, or perhaps you'd prefer the version with the DVD special bonus features turned on?

Sooooo.... thoughts? Comments? Suggestions? Criticisms? Whole new scenes? Offers of co-authorship? I am, even as we speak, submitting it for consideration by the Two Shades committee.

Life down here in the Vlak family's underground lair is exceedingly pleasant: I've spent most of the time watching films (one of my favourite films ever, Quick Change, was on last night) and reading pulp detective novels. This is, of course, research :-) I've also been trying to do some mathematical research: the geometry group stuff appears to work, but I'm having a frustrating time finding an actual definition.

Comments

[half-of-monty.livejournal.com]

Permissions won't let us read the script!

Merry quiet-bit-between-Christmas-and-new-year to the Vlak family.

[half-of-monty.livejournal.com]

Oh to be fair the second link works - permissions among the lovely bonus features turned on!

[pozorvlak.livejournal.com]

Cool. The other one should work now, too.

[antoniabaker.livejournal.com]

have given script to outside party to look at, who much admires it, admittedly he a 4o something montypython, rocky horror show, pg wodehose, 1940s spy movie, goons fan, so a little too much the ideal aduiance but it shows it can translate outside teh group, also gave it to maman who liked teh dramatis persona, disaproved of the mathmo jokes and wants to see the whole thing before deciding whetehr teh tea gags work.

'he says i would pay money to see that, its totally up my street, very funny and i liked the different allogories i could pick up on it' which is pretty cool.